Steve X16XE
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Originally posted by Robin
Adressed to 'PC Policeman', or 'dear sir/madam'?
Nope but i will do. 
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Robin
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That's not what I meant TBH Steve 
If you address it to a specific person, use 'yours sincerely'
If it's to dear sir/madam, use 'yours faithfully'
I'd make it as formal as possible, so I'd address it to a specific person and end it accordingly, not just put 'thanks', that's too informal I reckon.
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Robin
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Oh, and if you like, I can check the grammar of the whole thing for you if you u2u it
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Robin
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Steve X16XE
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Cheers Robin. Your a Star
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Russ
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i can check it and hide rus swears in white font, then when the police man reads it he wll never know..
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Steve
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Therefore, this proves that we were not on a mobile telephone at the time of the incident, deeming the third parties' accusations to be misjudged.
[Edited on 28-08-2007 by Steve]
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Paul_J
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post whole letter up here...
I fear the whole letter is junk.
MY letter to the courts definately helped me (Thanks dave17!) - it was apparently written by a lawyer dave17 used haha.
[Edited on 28-08-2007 by Paul_J]
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Ian
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Contravene would normally be used for factual stuff not accusations. You can refute an accusation.
Also I'm not sure whether I would start the sentence with 'Therefore'.
Post the entire letter tbh.
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Steve
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iv changed my version slightly
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Ian
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Not sure whether an accusation would be false, its not a fact so it can't have that state.
Unfounded perhaps, or mistaken. Needs to sound accidental unless you want to make him out to be a liar. Might just be short-sighted and you've offended him unnecessarily.
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Butler
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dictionary.com
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Steve
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iv changed my version again 
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Ian
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In fact I wouldn't even say therefore we were this or that. Either you have facts or not. Its not really up to you to explain the implications of your proof.
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Robin
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I changed it for him, it doesn't say 'Therefore' now, and that's not a seperate sentence, it was at the end of the last paragraph.
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Steve X16XE
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quote:
Originally posted by Ian
Not sure whether an accusation would be false, its not a fact so it can't have that state.
Unfounded perhaps, or mistaken. Needs to sound accidental unless you want to make him out to be a liar. Might just be short-sighted and you've offended him unnecessarily.
Yes i do. He has said a few other things that were untrue. So if things go anyfurther this can be used agains him (the Mondeo man).
But as far as i know nothing else is going to happen in the matter.
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Jules S
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Post it up here or somebody u2u it to me.
I'm happy to have a look/make comment if it's needed 
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Steve X16XE
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I've already sent it. Robin has "fixed" it for me.
Cheers for the help tho.
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