a_j_mair
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Registered: 23rd Jan 04
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applying for a job
was updating my cv and am not sur what to right in the profile. i used to say:
an architectural technoligist graduate looking for a position in a reputible architects firm
i have now been at my current job a year and i am just wanting to move on to better things as my current job is badly managed and i do not get paid a decent salary either
what should i write in my profile 
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MarkW
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Registered: 19th Mar 04
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an architectural technoligist graduate with *** years experience in *** industry. looking to move to a more varied and innovate company with chance of progression & job security
something along those lines.
[Edited on 20-10-2005 by MarkW]
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blebo
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Seeking new challenges and opertunities <sp>
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a_j_mair
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heres what i have now
An architectural technologist graduate with 2 year’s experience in the construction industry. Looking to move to a more innovate company with chance of progression and job security. Has worked in an engineer’s office, architects office and also on a building site gaining experience and a good understanding of how the construction trade works. Able to work on own initiative or as part of a team and can deal with all aspects of communication.
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blebo
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quote:
Originally posted by a_j_mair
2 yeras experiance......Has worked in an engineer’s office, architects office and also on a building site
Reads as don't employ me as I wont hang around long
[Edited on 20-10-2005 by blebo]
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TNM
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quote:
Originally posted by blebo
quote:
Originally posted by a_j_mair
2 yeras experiance......Has worked in an engineer’s office, architects office and also on a building site
Reads as don't employ me as I wont hang around long
[Edited on 20-10-2005 by blebo]
Depends on the trade.
people dont stay in jobs for life any more.
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blebo
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I plan to stay in my job till I retire
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a_j_mair
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revised
An architectural technologist graduate with 2 year’s experience in the construction industry. Looking to move to a more innovate company with chance of progression and job security seeking challenges and oppertunities.. Has worked in varying construction environments and has experience and a good understanding of how the construction trade works. Able to work on own initiative or as part of a team and can deal with all aspects of communication.
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blebo
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Better cause "varying construction environments" could all be with the one company.
Would also say "and job security WHILST seeking challenges and oppertunities
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a_j_mair
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think that sounds not to bad  cheers 
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blebo
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My fav bit in my CV
I have developed many skills ranging from technical to customer management skills to ensure that all customer needs are meet and exceeded where appropriate.
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a_j_mair
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ok then
An architectural technologist graduate with 2 year’s experience in the construction industry. Looking to move to a more innovate company with chance of progression and job security whilst seeking challenges and opportunities. Has worked in varying construction environments and has experience and a good understanding of how the construction trade works. Able to work on own initiative or as part of a team and have developed many skills ranging from technical to customer management skills to ensure that all customer needs are meet and exceeded where appropriate.
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MarkW
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Registered: 19th Mar 04
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leave it as tht, you just ned to change "meet" to met 
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