AK
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have a look at.....
Its just a quick knock up to get some pics and text for an Ad.... any suggestions, and which pic would you use for the Ad in Autotrader?
http://www.csdevelopments.com/skyline/
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S1MON
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thats a decent pic.
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willay
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them blue gash things in the middle of the wheels ruin it
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AK
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suggestions on site, price, text.... not car
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S1MON
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site seems fine
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willay
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font needs to be Arial
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willay
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need to clearly lay out the features of the car, maybe use tables/tabs
maybe list 'good bits/bad bits' ala ebay.
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willay
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pound sign on the price, could be selling it for 7,900 fish fingers
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PaulW
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quote: Originally posted by willay
pound sign on the price, could be selling it for 7,900 fish fingers
or mince pies... it is near christmas afterall!
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willay
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quote: Originally posted by PaulW
quote: Originally posted by willay
pound sign on the price, could be selling it for 7,900 fish fingers
or mince pies... it is near christmas afterall!
MINCE PIES!
what a deal      
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Andy Stocker
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^^^ that pic looks ace
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MatthewR
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Spoiler makes alot of diff dont it Andy
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AK
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just thinking of bad points There arent any real ones at the moment A very small dent, and a slight scratch round the door handle.... thats it
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MatthewR
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I wouldnt bother putting the bad points, u cud say about the scratch and dent if a buyer rings/views
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Andy Stocker
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Spoiler makes a whole lot of difference!
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AK
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i will put this one on the ad.....
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AK
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you see the thickness of the FMIC in that pic 
its huge
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