deano87
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Registered: 21st Oct 06
Location: Bedfordshire Drives: Ford Fiesta
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quote: Originally posted by corsabadboyhotmailcouk
and jasmine but shes going with my mate now
Sloppy seconds.
Anyway, profile is an improvement
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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quote: Originally posted by CorsAsh
quote: naaaaaah it wernit haha am ryt eee itz soooooo sunny a luv the sunshine ooo a mans just broke hiz tree cutter outsyd haha! hav ya lukd at me piccyz?? xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Should be sentenced to death by cockslapping and/or teabagging for typing like that.
it says:
no it wasnt lol ok its nice and sunny outside, i love sunny days, a man is cutting trees down outside and just broke his saw. have you looked at my pictures? kiss kiss kiss etc etc
there you go a charver translation
and no o iwould never dream of driving without insurance tax and mot, it stays in my garage and gets towed down when i do work on it
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Jules
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Registered: 26th Nov 04
Location: Ipswich, Suffolk Status: Happy
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quote: Originally posted by corsabadboyhotmailcouk
after joining CS i got quite a (very) harsh reaction to my gay childish bebo site. So i have wrote it in english and sorted my pics out. What do you think? espeshially jules? and about the user name hopefully i will change that soon, very soon, but the bebo link cannot be changed so I will have to live with it cheers, criticism accepted
http://corsabadboy.bebo.com
Much better, just a couple of pointers:
You have a "i" right at the start when you need an "a"
Change the lower case single "i"'s to uppercase ones (It should always be uppercase when making reference to yourself - i.e I walked the dog today)
Captial letters at the start of a persons name (forename and surname) and also on the name of locations.
Try and get some better quality pics if possible
Oh and I like your car, looks very nice, and thankfully, not in fitting with your username!
Other than that it's a 100% improvement
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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quote: Originally posted by Jules
quote: Originally posted by corsabadboyhotmailcouk
after joining CS i got quite a (very) harsh reaction to my gay childish bebo site. So i have wrote it in english and sorted my pics out. What do you think? espeshially jules? and about the user name hopefully i will change that soon, very soon, but the bebo link cannot be changed so I will have to live with it cheers, criticism accepted
http://corsabadboy.bebo.com
Much better, just a couple of pointers:
You have a "i" right at the start when you need an "a"
Change the lower case single "i"'s to uppercase ones (It should always be uppercase when making reference to yourself - i.e I walked the dog today)
Captial letters at the start of a persons name (forename and surname) and also on the name of locations.
Try and get some better quality pics if possible
Oh and I like your car, looks very nice, and thankfully, not in fitting with your username!
Other than that it's a 100% improvement
thanks, pointers noted and will be changed later today when i can be bothered. And name change reqeust has been issued
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Lawrah
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Registered: 25th Dec 04
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I shall add you, you can be my friend
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Skylined
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Registered: 27th Sep 05
Location: Sideways, Surrey
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he's my friend
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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hahahaaaaaa add me where?
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Lawrah
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Registered: 25th Dec 04
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go on, take one huge guess.
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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erm bebo?
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Jules
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Registered: 26th Nov 04
Location: Ipswich, Suffolk Status: Happy
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CBBHM.co.uk - Lawrahhh is of immense hotness, you are a lucky guy to be added as a friend of hers!
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Welsh Dan
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Registered: 23rd Mar 00
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quote: Originally posted by corsabadboyhotmailcouk
i will be changing that soon, will get 1 with my new engine in and my exhaust popper kit
What the fuck is an exhaust popper? Is it the poor mans version of a flamer?
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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quote: Originally posted by Jules
CBBHM.co.uk - Lawrahhh is of immense hotness, you are a lucky guy to be added as a friend of hers!
i seen when i accepted her, wow
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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quote: Originally posted by Welsh Dan
quote: Originally posted by corsabadboyhotmailcouk
i will be changing that soon, will get 1 with my new engine in and my exhaust popper kit
What the fuck is an exhaust popper? Is it the poor mans version of a flamer?
basicly a button to make your car backfire, mine wont do it on the key
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AndyKent
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Registered: 3rd Sep 05
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quote: Originally posted by corsabadboyhotmailcouk
quote: Originally posted by Welsh Dan
quote: Originally posted by corsabadboyhotmailcouk
i will be changing that soon, will get 1 with my new engine in and my exhaust popper kit
What the fuck is an exhaust popper? Is it the poor mans version of a flamer?
basicly a button to make your car backfire, mine wont do it on the key
WTF would you want this?
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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mate has a 1.2 8v that spits foot long flames when he does it, its something to show off at cruises
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Ste L
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Registered: 3rd Jul 06
Location: Manchester Drives: 106 16v Rallye
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never seen old one, so cant comment...
car look's tidy though, cant beat white corsa's
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Corsa Sport Gav
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Registered: 12th Feb 03
Location: Durham, County Durham Drives: A6 Allroad
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back fire isnt good!
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A1EX
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Registered: 29th Mar 00
Location: Turku, Finland
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Our Father who doesn’t recognise any other car.
CORSA be thy Name.
Thy Kingdom come.
Tyres will be done.
On Earth as it is in LISBURN
Give us This Day or GSI,SRI and GSI 4X4 TURBO
And praise our CORSA
for we would KILL those who TRESPASS against us.
and lead us not into TROUBLE
But deliver us from TRAFFIC BRANCH and SPEED TRAPS
For thine is the IRMSCHER,the RED TOP and the ECO TEC.
forever and ever.
AMEN
WHAT THE FUCK   
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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quote: Originally posted by A1EX
Our Father who doesn’t recognise any other car.
CORSA be thy Name.
Thy Kingdom come.
Tyres will be done.
On Earth as it is in LISBURN
Give us This Day or GSI,SRI and GSI 4X4 TURBO
And praise our CORSA
for we would KILL those who TRESPASS against us.
and lead us not into TROUBLE
But deliver us from TRAFFIC BRANCH and SPEED TRAPS
For thine is the IRMSCHER,the RED TOP and the ECO TEC.
forever and ever.
AMEN
copyed it off another page, dont know why, needs to go
WHAT THE FUCK   
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Whittie
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Registered: 11th Aug 06
Location: North Wales Drives: BMW, Corsa & Fiat
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quote: Originally posted by corsabadboyhotmailcouk
quote: Originally posted by A1EX
Our Father who doesn’t recognise any other car.
CORSA be thy Name.
Thy Kingdom come.
Learn to quote mate 
Tyres will be done.
On Earth as it is in LISBURN
Give us This Day or GSI,SRI and GSI 4X4 TURBO
And praise our CORSA
for we would KILL those who TRESPASS against us.
and lead us not into TROUBLE
But deliver us from TRAFFIC BRANCH and SPEED TRAPS
For thine is the IRMSCHER,the RED TOP and the ECO TEC.
forever and ever.
AMEN
copyed it off another page, dont know why, needs to go
WHAT THE FUCK   
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taylorboosh
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Registered: 3rd Apr 07
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i know i know its gay and silly and just plain bollix
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Whittie
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Registered: 11th Aug 06
Location: North Wales Drives: BMW, Corsa & Fiat
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