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daymoon
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Registered: 1st Aug 08
Location: Selby, North Yorkshire
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24th Sep 08 at 19:21   View Garage View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

Hi. this an advert of a car i put up.. this is my sisters car...

http://search.autotrader.co.uk/es-uk/www/cars/MAZDA/Ne-2-4-5-6-7-8-27-44-49-53-61-64-67-103-133-146-236,N-240-4294967256/advert.action?R=200838319287240&distance=1&postcode=YO8+4YE&channel=CARS&make=MAZDA&model=&min_pr=&max_pr=&max_mileage=

do you think it sounds good? or should i chage some bits..


[Edited on 24-09-2008 by daymoon]
kz
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Registered: 9th Aug 02
Location: Southend, Essex Drives: Mini Cooper S
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24th Sep 08 at 20:28   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

seems okay mate not sure about the spelling of "syster" though
daymoon
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Registered: 1st Aug 08
Location: Selby, North Yorkshire
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24th Sep 08 at 20:30   View Garage View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

cheers for opinion! hope it sells soon!

 
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