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AK
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23rd Jan 08 at 12:47   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
just away to put a car up for sale, ken... Can anyone see any glaring booboo's with the following webpage?

http://www.trackscotland.co.uk/projects/alfa.htm

Thoughts on the price I need to have another look at AT to compare.

Oh.... and they are the first pics I have ever taken of the car

[Edited on 23-01-2008 by AK]
Jamie
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I'd change the contact email address to maybe your work one or home one
Tom
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23rd Jan 08 at 12:49   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Looks pretty professional

Where are you advertising though?
Tom
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quote:
Originally posted by Jamie
I'd change the contact email address to maybe your work one or home one


And the URL?
AK
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23rd Jan 08 at 12:51   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
why?

I have nothing to hide....
Rob B
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23rd Jan 08 at 13:06   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Cause people might think hmm, track alfa
Bram
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23rd Jan 08 at 13:55   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Personally, I'm always dubious of adverts where the car has just been washed and you can still see soap on the ground. I would have dried it off or at least driven it down the road a tad
Tom
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23rd Jan 08 at 13:56   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
^ why?
Jamie
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quote:
Originally posted by Rob B
Cause people might think hmm, track alfa


Exactly point I was getting at.

I'm sure you don't have anything to hide
Fee
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23rd Jan 08 at 14:01   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Rob B
Cause people might think hmm, track alfa


PMSL

That's made my day!
Bram
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quote:
Originally posted by Tom
^ why?


Because even a turd of a car with terrible paintwork can be made to look not half as bad by chucking a couple of buckets of water over it. I don't think it gives a true representation of what the car looks like (i.e. dry)
AK
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nobody with a brain would think that its a track car

I'm not finished cleaning it yet anyway so may get more pics. Need to add some interior ones too.

 
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